Paying for his humiliation

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For you readers of my story Decembersville, remember that little segment of Chima's past in chapter 12? The one of when he went to the school prom and it all turned out to be a nasty trick? Well, here's a thrown away scene of what happened hours earlier that same night. I was going to put this continuation at the end of Chapter 12, but... you know what? I have no idea why I didn't write it in. Well... here's the deleted segment.
If you don't understand my drawing style, here's a walkthrough of every panel. It's read left-to-right:
...Panel 1: It's night time and the same girls that tricked Chima that night are laughing as they walk outside the school. There's a tiny shadow of a bird in the moonlight.
...Panel 2: The two girl's are making fun of Chima behind his back alone outside, unaware that there's a bunch of black birds charging at them from behind.
...Panel 3: A shadowy black vulture swiftly claws the girl from behind. Her friend is shocked.
...Panel 4: The girl is cursing the bird out for hurting her and ruining her look, but then...
...Panel 5: The two girls quickly spin around as they hear cawing sounds.
...Panel 6: A swarm of large black birds ready to attack.
...Panel 7: In the girl's eye, there's the reflection of a bird coming to get her. She's screaming.
...Panel 8: A close-up on how the bird's look like.
...Panel 9: The demonic birds are attacking the girls violently as someone looks at them from behind a wall.
...Panel 10: Teenage Chimabell is laughing sadistically at the scene, clawing the wall.

I was bored when I drew this comic, so please forgive me for the sloppiness and mediocre inking and detail and crap (I FAIL at backgrounds, so please belay that).

I guess I also drew this cuz, for some freaky reason, Chima's become a bit popular O_O;
Bad guys are so awesome and fun to write about ^^... but it still makes me wanna drive a stake into his eye whenever he bullies Zero around (and there WORSE bullying to come!!)
Is it okay for writers (no matter how bad they are in writing) to dislike certain characters of theirs??

Decembersville (c) Andi